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                                             Churned clouds and vertebrae of gales meander over
                                             your fears
                                             spitting sand in lungs,
                                             that missed a few pages of breaths,
                                             there, in the Ventose cove,
                                             in ribcages,


                                              broken.




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Outside your binoculars there’s a static world.
Feel the blanket around you,
thick, soiled cobwebs,
moth-woven,
moth-eaten,

embracing the skinny throats of stifled candles
like an empty fishing net.

~

                                       Even termites have abandoned this place and the
                                       windowsill keeps their leftovers like sentiments from
                                       a past life,
                                       more real.

~

Long ago your apprehensions built a mast.
Oary gaze is a storm – they plow the waves like cordage-marked fingers.

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Salt-caramelized russet sediments on the panes mothball pieces of a jigsaw on your face,
a jigsaw of a hold’s gloom and coal.
And shy stars dive into you, you – the alluvion of darkness.

~

Distance’s bosom is bottomless – vestiges of lanterns and ferries
as many as the lighthouses you’ve built on your bare toes – run, always lost in shimmering coverts and weeds.

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Run
run
run
run
run
run
run
run
run

like back then along the seafront and the harbour when your hair used to be long.
No looking back now, you’ve peered hard enough.

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                                             Churned clouds and vertebrae of gales mock you
                                              spitting anchors in a heart
                                              that whispers the names of the sea-eaten,
                                              there, in the Ventose cove,


                                              in ribcages,



                                              broken.
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The wives of dead sailors always wait for them, candles burning to show the way to the lost, for eternity, they say.


Ventose - the windy month

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Preview:
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I :heart: the preview!!! It's so pretty. :D


My favourite part was the way you accented the "run"s so it made it feel as though I was actually running.
^^


- Fobo

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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
Thank you. Maybe I'll submit it separately :]
Haha, awesome, that was the part I put very little thought into :D

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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...

"A song can also not talk about love..."
Phwoar, that's some gorgeous imagery :love:

the first stanza.... has got to be my favourite :D

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Dum spiro spero.
Super, super, super, super! As always!

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Insight is made of love/hate relations
This is just plain beautiful.
There are so many lines and little word clusters that just get stuck in my head.

like an empty fishing net.
Long ago your apprehensions built a mast.
the names of the sea-eaten


Augh! To point out a few.
Love it.
I like how it almost ebbs and falls like the sea.

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You've thrown the worst fear
That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world

- Bob Dylan, "Masters of War"
:cling:
Thank you, it wasn't intentional though :D

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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...

"A song can also not talk about love..."
:hug:

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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...

"A song can also not talk about love..."
Thank you, honey. This one is probably the one I've put most work in. It was partially inspired by the poetry of *ThelemaJ he's one of my new idols. :aww:
Haha, it's almost the same as the last one ;P

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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...

"A song can also not talk about love..."

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