Churned clouds and vertebrae of gales meander over
your fears
spitting sand in lungs,
that missed a few pages of breaths,
there, in the Ventose cove,
in ribcages,
broken.
~
Outside your binoculars theres a static world.
Feel the blanket around you,
thick, soiled cobwebs,
moth-woven,
moth-eaten,
embracing the skinny throats of stifled candles
like an empty fishing net.
~
Even termites have abandoned this place and the
windowsill keeps their leftovers like sentiments from
a past life,
more real.
~
Long ago your apprehensions built a mast.
Oary gaze is a storm they plow the waves like cordage-marked fingers.
~
Salt-caramelized russet sediments on the panes mothball pieces of a jigsaw on your face,
a jigsaw of a holds gloom and coal.
And shy stars dive into you, you the alluvion of darkness.
~
Distances bosom is bottomless vestiges of lanterns and ferries
as many as the lighthouses youve built on your bare toes run, always lost in shimmering coverts and weeds.
~
Run
run
run
run
run
run
run
run
run
like back then along the seafront and the harbour when your hair used to be long.
No looking back now, youve peered hard enough.
~
Churned clouds and vertebrae of gales mock you
spitting anchors in a heart
that whispers the names of the sea-eaten,
there, in the Ventose cove,
in ribcages,
broken.

















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My favourite part was the way you accented the "run"s so it made it feel as though I was actually running.
^^
- Fobo
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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
Haha, awesome, that was the part I put very little thought into
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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...
"A song can also not talk about love..."
the first stanza.... has got to be my favourite
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Dum spiro spero.
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Insight is made of love/hate relations
There are so many lines and little word clusters that just get stuck in my head.
like an empty fishing net.
Long ago your apprehensions built a mast.
the names of the sea-eaten
Augh! To point out a few.
Love it.
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You've thrown the worst fear
That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world
- Bob Dylan, "Masters of War"
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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...
"A song can also not talk about love..."
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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...
"A song can also not talk about love..."
Haha, it's almost the same as the last one
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Una canzone può anche non parlar d'amore...
"A song can also not talk about love..."
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